You have recently faced a problem at the airport An employee of the airport helped you with this matter Write a letter to the airport manager and say What the problem was How the person helped you Suggest the manager to praise this employee in some way

Essay topics:

You have recently faced a problem at the airport. An employee of the airport helped you with this matter. Write a letter to the airport manager and say What the problem was? How the person helped you? Suggest the manager to praise this employee in some way

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to thank one of your employees, Herman Singh, who helped me a lot with a problem we faced at the airport.

Last Monday, my family and I returned from our vacation. As we were going to collect the baggage, my son fell down from the escalator. He got minor injuries and we all become upset. After some time I realized that one of our bags was missing, and all documents were in that bag.

Therefore, we were unable to move forward without collecting the bag. Then one of the members present over there noticed us and came forward. We explained the situation to him. Firstly, he arranged some medicines for my son and inquire about the lost item. Fortunately, with the help of him, we got our luggage as it was deposited by someone to the lost and deposit counter.

It would be very kind of you if you convey our thanks to him. Having gone through your company policy, I came to know that you award the best agents each month. It is my humble request that nominates his name as the best worker for this month to appreciate him for his noble deed.

Once again thank you and your employees for helping us.

Yours faithfully,

Jaspreet Singh

Votes
Average: 8 (9 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52314814815 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29285416296 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643518518519 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9633475078 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193740307307 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544553034666 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769830095112 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129077447076 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933297676681 0.0580467560999 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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