Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
It is claimed that in past times, people were healthier and spent life happily as compared to the present era due to the involvement of workouts in daily routine and their interaction with relatives. These days, however, a majority of individuals are falling prey to mental and physical health issues. This essay agrees that spending a sizeable amount of time on technology and cut-throat competition are the two biggest reasons behind their miserable condition, and describes involving exercise and balancing official and personal life are viable solutions.
To commence with, utilizing free time on electronic gadgets is the main culprit of the health of individuals. That is to say, owing to the advent of modern techniques, the way of spending duration by the masses has completely changed. As a diverse means of entertainment provided by various websites on the internet forces society to remain glued to these devices, they are getting detached from the outdoor games and their family, which make them isolated from society, and they are generally confined under the four walls of the house, thus they have to suffer from psychometric problems, such as insomnia, depression, and anxiety. Apart from this, burgeoning competition is another reason for the phenomenon. In other world, employees do the job around the clock to surpass their opponents to get promotion in the workplace, that might only be possible if they complete their targets on a fixed date, thus submitting task before the deadline keep they occupied for 24 hours, and they forget to rest, which further gives rise to ailments. A recent survey conducted has shown that about 85% of the workforce are reeling under depression due to workload.
In regard to the solutions, including body exercise in daily routine can combat this issue to a certain extent. It has been proven by psychological professionals that devoting at least half an hour to the workout does not only beneficial for substantial well-being but also provides multifarious advantages to mental health. Taking an example of Japan, about 45% of the organizations have their own gyms, as they believe that staff could concentrate on their work more effectively if they spend some duration on natural movement. Another measure that cannot be overlooked is the work-life balance. Masses should not run a race where everyone is busy making money, in fact, they should have some seconds to communicate with family members because these are the persons who take care of us, help to deal with all kinds of difficulties.
On balance, it is being considered by communities that in ancient turn people have a more sound mind and body, but nowadays individuals have altered their way of doing work, which casts an adverse effect on holistic growth. This essay suggests that adopting adequate measures, such as making a rapport between professional and family life and performing outdoor activities can make a positive change in health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, thus, well, apart from, at least, in fact, such as, in regard to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 481.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17671517672 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7463530904 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 176.041082164 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596673596674 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7471926789 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.625 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0625 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184671468249 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521757087438 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334548403282 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104894751474 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174133681258 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 78.4519038076 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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