You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• describe the place where you are living
• invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Mick,
I hope you are doing well. It seems like ages since the last time we have met each other. I have moved to another city and now I am writing to inform you.
If you can remember, I told you that I had applied for a Ph.D. position, and fortunately, I was successful and I moved to a small city in Germany. As the Ph.D. would take 3 years, I have to live here for the next 3 years, but more I spend time here, more I become interested in this lovely city.
This city is located in the west of Germany and has great weather, however, it is too cold for this time of the year. I rent an apartment near the university, in hometown, at the end of a clean and quiet street. It is quite small, one bedroom, a small kitchen with a balcony, overlooking a garden. You should come and see the neighbor, which is surrounded by trees. I am sure you will love it.
The reason why I am writing is to invite you to come here and spend your holiday with me. It would definitely be such a great opportunity to see each other and I will show you this beautiful city.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Yalda.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mick, I hope you are doing well. It seems like...
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Line 19, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hearing from you. Best regards, Yalda.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22374429224 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31811513165 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2995430207 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278131484473 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905547823091 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673267688552 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15613654612 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422490965492 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.