You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• describe the place where you are living
• invite your friend to come and see you
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Anna,
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, its been a long time since I have written a letter to you because of my hectic schedule. I hope you are having a joyous time.
As you know, I was expecting promotion, last month my company promoted me to senior manager position of their new branch in Singapore. Though it has been few days since I have moved to Singapore but I would like to tell that it is a beautiful city.
I have rented an apartment in Tanjong Pagar in Singapore and it has magnificent surrounding facing the ocean. The apartment has two large bedrooms with attached bathroom, huge dining area and a very big kitchen. There is big lawn in the front of the house facing the ocean. In evenings one can enjoy the sun set and the cool breeze.
Please plan to visit to my place next month. We will have a great fun and I want you too to experience the beauty of this city.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Take care, See you soon
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake care, See you soon Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42372881356 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33410610861 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0513069165 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232752236514 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801493105741 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678536101056 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123885331613 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580489204552 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.