You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear John,
Hope you and your family are doing great. I’m writing this letter to inform you, that I have moved to a new house in Colombo. As you know a few months ago I applied for a loan and it has been approved two weeks ago. You know well, that I had a dream in life to buy my own house. Finally, my dream comes true. I’m really happy and so much excited. I’m sorry because I couldn’t get a chance to tell you until now.
The main purpose I have decided to change my house because it is too small for me and my family. My new house is huge, it has 5 bedrooms with two attached bathrooms ...
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Essay evaluation report
and so much excited
and so excited
The main purpose I have decided to change my house because it is too small for me
The main purpose I have decided to change my house is that it is too small for me
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 215 250
No. of Characters: 845 1200
No. of Different Words: 127 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.829 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.93 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.055 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 10 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.353 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.577 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.177 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have fun and enjoy with each other. I am waiting for you for this coming week...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3317535545 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25724800856 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1072331808 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234234160651 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776263547673 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900957725199 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145276925014 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810030966987 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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