Dear Jane,
I`m writing to tell you I have moved to my new house last month. These two weeks were really busy and frustrating for me to get everything right.
As I told you before, this house costs me just half a million dollars, which is much less than my expectation for a two-storey house on the coast. These are four bedrooms and two bathrooms. And what`s more wonderful: it`s fully furnitures and come with all necessary amenities like a dishwasher and an electrical cooker. By the way, I`m going to make the huge basement my entertaining entre! All I needed to do was just moving in with all the packages and, of course, the boring process of unpacking and tidying.
Why don`t you come and see me next weekend? We can watch movies, play video games and enjoy the beautiful views of the sea on the balcony. If it`s warm enough then, we can even go surfing. Isn`t it wonderful? Just can`t wait to see you here!
I`m really looking forward to hear from you soon.
Love,
Kevin Young
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ere! I'm really looking forward to hear from you soon. Love, Kevin Young
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, then, of course, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82777777778 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58004569775 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705555555556 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1547217328 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4166666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155067023258 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548021929037 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806216930861 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103810570374 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568630180002 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.