You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Rakesh,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you that I bought a new home for my family lately and we recently relocated.
As you are fully aware, we were living in a small two-bedroom apartment, which neither hardly had any space for my growing family nor near to the city. Moreover, there were few issues such as water leakage in the bathroom.
Considering all that, I have been saving money to own a new bungalow and now I am proud that we could finally afford one in a beautiful location. My new house is not only located near the city center but also the proximity to the public transport network. Although it is a bit expensive than my budget, maintenance costs for two years would be covered. We now live in a three-bedroom house, including a room for my kids and I am sure my kid will love it. Apart from it, it also has a modular kitchen as well as a courtyard to grow a few plants.
I would like to invite you and your family for dinner and I would be delighted if you can pay a visit this weekend.
See you soon.
Regards,
Sudheerkumar

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29577464789 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46537439946 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5488333838 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163213353621 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573003550674 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587346946009 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104009261998 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673379044449 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.