You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Jose,
I am writing this letter in order to let you know, that I have moved to a new apartment in Rode Bay. As you know months ago I applied for a loan to buy this apartment and last week was approved. It was so exciting moment, sorry for tell you until now.
Well mate the apartment is huge has three bedrooms and four bathrooms one for each room. Also it has a big kitchen, dinning room, a big balcony with a fantastic water view, in white I am thinking to put all my gym to do exercise with. The camp has green grass, Furthermore, has pool, and big parking, Actually I can use three parking spaces.
I do not want to say good bye, before invite you to my open house that will be next 21st of July. I know that maybe you could be on holydays but, you know that you are welcome any time.
I hope meet you soon.
Regards,
Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s and four bathrooms one for each room. Also it has a big kitchen, dinning room, a b...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...know that you are welcome any time. I hope meet you soon. Regards, Frank
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213903743316 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.181818181818 0.167888034529 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0748663101604 0.0606518309736 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0374331550802 0.0506257000042 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.106951871658 0.118615021944 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.096256684492 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0320855614973 0.041066498444 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.10186851151 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0374331550802 0.0385302599488 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0641711229947 0.0714148451538 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0160427807487 0.0191574576366 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00534759358289 0.00930345855455 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 845.0 1141.60824742 74% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.134020619 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 5.53046319177 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.175757575758 0.284621296913 62% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.145454545455 0.211203875043 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0969696969697 0.133321485273 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0424242424242 0.0843313296314 50% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10186851151 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622163163488 111% => OK
Word variations: 73.0327309309 62.8969750728 116% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5507457775 44.7399317507 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 90.9928171075 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.4300151701 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.613754768223 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 31.0454545455 37.5504026743 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.04918032787 1.13073093955 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276666606257 0.331212695627 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0922850548739 0.0927372745006 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0628743967988 0.0736520305886 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641439999763 0.579516596996 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15441592024 0.180689518051 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1006456479 0.122183219658 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822321905541 0.0765303033291 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.101225433967 0.211926503985 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0438426996759 0.0737400523855 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155356253917 0.203819188451 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072632993413 0.067151250289 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.