Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. It has been so long since we last met and thus I am writing to invite you to visit me in my new home.
You will be glad to know that I have been promoted to the post of Senior Manager at the New York branch for which I had to relocate here last week. Also, my company has provided me a newly built three bedroom flat which is huge and beautiful. My wife is very felicitous after moving in here as it has a spacious modular kitchen with a big well maintained garden at the front and to pleasant surprise it has a large swimming pool at the back which is lovely.
Since, we have not seen each other for so long, I really want you to come here for at least a week, so that we can spend some great time together. There is also a lake nearby where we can do boating as well as you love it a lot.
Looking forward for your quick reply so that I can apply for leaves in advance.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'flat' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'flats'.
Suggestion: flats
...provided me a newly built three bedroom flat which is huge and beautiful. My wife is...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, thus, well, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0103626943 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97120128695 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.979648657 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167829110217 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686989671158 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374067888499 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926264763551 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456205678773 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 70.7449484536 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.98 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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