Dear John,
Hope you are coping well with the winter cold? Don't worry, summer is around the corner. As mentioned in our last discussion,I 'm writing to inform you that we 've finally relocated from our old accommodation my family and I are now in a better place that i we all loved.
Let me explain in details. My former place was very boring and uninteresting for the children. They practically
have no one to play with and no recreation centre for them to relax. The former place is a new development area and has few people living there at the moment.I thought the area will develop rapidly hence the reason why we initially settled for the place, but the rate is quite slow and can't live with the children's complain any longer.
Our new accomodation is very exciting infact it's a dreamed home we have been longing for. The building itself has very spacious rooms and a big balcony at the back to relax. We even have two families neighbours on the either side of our building and my children have been flowing with them ever since we moved to the area. The environment is very relax and lively. How i wish we have moved in there earlier!
I know you'd like to pay us visit? My wife is already request for this. We won't be available in the next two
weeks but we'd be expecting you by the last weekend of this month.Sure, you will spend the weekend with us. Then I will have time to take you round the community and other places of interest here.
I hope to hear from you shortly.
Yours,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...u are coping well with the winter cold? Dont worry, summer is around the corner. As ...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ner. As mentioned in our last discussion,I m writing to inform you that we ve fina...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sting for the children. They practically have no one to play with and no recreati...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...s few people living there at the moment.I thought the area will develop rapidly h...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e place, but the rate is quite slow and cant live with the childrens complain any lo...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ew accomodation is very exciting infact its a dreamed home we have been longing for...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vironment is very relax and lively. How i wish we have moved in there earlier! ...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
... have moved in there earlier! I know youd like to pay us visit? My wife is alread...
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Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is. We wont be available in the next two weeks but wed be expecting you by the la...
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Line 10, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sure
...g you by the last weekend of this month.Sure, you will spend the weekend with us. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45323741007 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36190457905 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2255259213 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143135770349 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445570298519 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418107674539 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653426059006 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391657060765 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.