you have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letterexplain why you have moveddescribe the new houseinvite your friend to come and visit

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you have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Gagan,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my relocation to the new house in Oyesterbay from Upanga.
As you know traffic is overcrowded in Dar es Salaam and it takes me more than one hour to arrive(reach) office in the morning and about one hour to come back home in the evening so I decided to shift to a new house in Oyesterbay which is just 5 minutes walking distance from our office.

The new residence where I have shifted is ocean facing and on the back of the house there are so many trees. There is also a swimming pool inside the boundary wall of the house and a garden just in front of my buidling. On the back of the house in one corner, there is a barbeque where we can enjoy the barbeque chicken and fish.

I like if you come to our new house along with your wife on the weekend so that we can enjoy the Sunday on the swimming pool and have some fresh air from the ocean.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kes me more than one hour to arrivereach office in the morning and about one hour...
^^
Line 8, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and have some fresh air from the ocean.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11797752809 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1395940371 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9620112949 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136561720256 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694787904289 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602681876031 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952505831951 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514526030995 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.21 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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