You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved.
Describe the new house.
Invite your friend to come and visit.
Date: April 21, 2019
Dear Rekha,
I am writing this letter to tell you that me and my family has recently shifted from old Ontario to new Ontario due to changing of my job. I have moved from my existing organisation and joining an organisation not only financially much bigger than my earlier company but also they highly recommendate and support work and personal life balance with in the organisation staff.
As you are my english speaking buddy i would like to share with you some of the interior and structure of my new house which is in new Ontario.The house which we have taken on lease is more specious than previous one. it contain 4 bedroom, 1 kitchen and 1 big hall. The house which took is drastically cheaper than the existing one and it is also very near to my new organisation which family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">Ultimately help in saving of my monthly fund.
As we haven't met from a last few weeks, I am personally invite you and your family to come to our new house and we can have our dinner together jointly with our families.
Give my regards to your spouse and children.
With warm regards,
Praful Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...organisation and joining an organisation not only financially much bigger than my...
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Line 8, column 38, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... As you are my english speaking buddy i would like to share with you some of th...
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Line 8, column 69, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ng buddy i would like to share with you some of the interior and structure of my new house ...
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Line 8, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...of my new house which is in new Ontario.The house which we have taken on lease is m...
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Line 8, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ase is more specious than previous one. it contain 4 bedroom, 1 kitchen and 1 big ...
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Line 8, column 222, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
... is more specious than previous one. it contain 4 bedroom, 1 kitchen and 1 big hall. Th...
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Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... in saving of my monthly fund. As we havent met from a last few weeks, I am persona...
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Line 10, column 57, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'invited'.
Suggestion: invited
... from a last few weeks, I am personally invite you and your family to come to our new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75980392157 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07419388008 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3998445083 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168511995157 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667688504202 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578059175651 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846618803644 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491294786781 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.