You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words
Dear Bhanu,
hope you are doing well while reading the letter.
I am writing this letter to invite to our new house on the occasion of my baby birthday ceremony.
Recently vacated the older one because of the water problem and newly next to our flat bachelors has joined and they are making uncomfortable with their behaviour. Generally everyday night those people celebrate parties and making a disturbance to everyone. Couldn't tolerate and the owner was also not able to control them.
Hence, we shifted last week to the new house. Which is located in a very pleasant area and has four bedrooms, a kitchen and a balcony. Nearby we have a park, a swimming pool and gym facilities. In fact, it is very to my kid's school.
I would like to invite you to our sweet home please join us on my baby's birthday. we can spend a nice time having a delicious dinner at our home.
hope you will make your presence without fail.
your's lovingly,
Rekha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Couldn't
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...me please join us on my babys birthday. we can spend a nice time having a deliciou...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... having a delicious dinner at our home. hope you will make your presence without...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...ng a delicious dinner at our home. hope you will make your presence without fai...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... will make your presence without fail. yours lovingly, Rekha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62130177515 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39848697099 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721893491124 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1418897991 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0769230769 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165086023903 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053436669356 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428974326907 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799907700685 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372406978862 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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