Dear David Jonhson,
How’re things with you? Hope that you’re doing well. It’s been a long time since we kept in touch. I had been struggling with my ex houses conditions. For example, it was little bit old-fashioned which leads the wall to have moisture, as well as the heating system was not working as properly as it was supposed to.
The new house has an impressive look from outside and I moved to the second floor of it. The most fascinating about the house its vast hall that I can invite my friends to watch a film together. Central-heated system which means I will pay less than I used to in my previous house is the second thing that appealed to me. There are two balconies overseeing the sea which I can enjoy with the cup of tea and enjoying the landscape.
Your visit will obviously make me happy if you can. We can enjoy the house together and do not worry about housework, I will do them all. I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards
Erman DURAN
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... houses conditions. For example, it was little bit old-fashioned which leads the wall to h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49456521739 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5095222717 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2856328286 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6153846154 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107080810104 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386946638504 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402045382651 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689992926748 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00896201933895 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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