You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house
Hi John,
I am writing to inform you about my new house in your district. My family has already settled there, but they do not seem to feel at home in the neighborhood.
My new house is not as large as yours, but more than enough for six people. There are two floors with five rooms in each. It has a pool, garage and small garden, where both my children and mother-in-law enjoy spending time in. My wife is getting used to a spacious kitchen and still entirely occupied by placing our furniture from the old apartment, because it all is stuck on the first floor. Moreover, my new neighbors appear to be friendly, but we do not know them very well yet. Fortunately, my house is not far from the bus stop, so my children can commute to the local school easily, which is considered as the best in the region
My wife asks me to want you and your spouse to visit our house for a small party in order to celebrate the relocation. I will show you the garden as well as the garage, while our wives will be talking in the living room. I hope that this party will help her to relax in the circle of old friends. I am looking forward to your reply asap.
Best wishes,
Tolegen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 298, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to relax in the circle of old friends. I am looking forward to your reply asap. ...
^
Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to your reply asap. Best wishes, Tolegen.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31696428571 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28480729773 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2954875728 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131417457679 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494877724249 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760867917944 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113170006064 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062967655712 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.