You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Suzette,
I am thrilled to write to you that I have finally moved to a new and a bigger house! My sincere apologies to write to you after almost a month as I was very overwhelmed and occupied with moving from one corner of the city to another. It was quite a task!
Well, my new house is magnificent with huge windows in every room to allow natural light to brighten up every corner. My neighborhood is pretty friendly and the departmental cum medical store is conveniently just a five minute walk away! My mother is getting used to the spacious kitchen and showing off her gardening skills in the living room balcony where as my brother Matt and my father are still working on the basement that they have turned into a garage. I cannot wait to have you over for a barbeque night!
I would be a pleasure to have you and Sam over for the weekend. Could you please let me know if the both of you can make it? Looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes,
Harbani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ening skills in the living room balcony where as my brother Matt and my father are still...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33879781421 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37613825898 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.346370145 44.8134815571 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205296307477 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972268458997 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417282865351 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143369035377 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346819790147 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.