You have recently retired from a government job. It has been over two months and you have not received your pension order yet.
Write a letter to company manager informing about this and troubles that you have been facing.
In your letter
- Introduce yourself
- Explain the situation
- describe your difficulties and expectations from the development
Dear Mr. Lorenty,
My name is Jay Larosa and I worked at your organization for twenty years in a row. My last working day was April 1, 2019. I am writing this letter to apprise you about my pension order which is still pending with your organization, Sun Life Financials.
It has been more than two months but I have no clue on my provident funds processing. I tried to contact pension team helpdesk but they asked me to submit documents related to my employment. I have submitted the required documents on the same day to helpdesk team.
Now, I am trying to reach them but they are not responding. As you know, currently, I am not getting paid by your organization and I do not have any other source of income. Due to this, I have face some financial difficulties, even, I do not have money to buy cloths. I would like to request you to process my pension funds.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...r source of income. Due to this, I have face some financial difficulties, even, I do...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ess my pension funds. I look forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Jay
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50292397661 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65011019127 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2050657113 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300670198276 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098748962574 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069969653387 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162420070445 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348399414719 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.