You have recently retired from a government job. It has been over two months and you have not received your pension order yet.
Write a letter to the company manager informing about this and troubles that you have been facing.
In your letter
- Introduce yourself
- Explain the situation
- describe your difficulties and expectations from the development
Dear Mr. Lorenty,
I am writing this letter to apprise you about my pension order which is still pending with the company.
My name is Jay Larosa and I worked at Wipro Limited for twenty years in a row. I was retired from the company on 31st March 2019 and it was a voluntary retirement. I used to reports to you during my tenure with Wipro Limited. Moreover, I worked on financial projects under your guidance.
It has been more than two months but I have no clue on my pension order. I tried to contact helpdesk team but they told me that my annuity processing request is stuck somewhere.
Currently, I am facing many financial difficulties due to lack of money. Even, I am not able to buy clothes and eatable items. Furthermore, my wife is suffering from fever, and she needs immediate treatment but I do not have funds available to me. I would like to request you to process my pension order as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Jay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59776536313 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54520627189 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7601795717 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3076923077 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259253351408 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833861539829 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703541218267 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133611128902 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318786569079 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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