You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your newjob
tell him/her your other news.
Dear Ankita,
I trust that you are doing well. There is a news to share with you. I have switched to a new job. My work in former company was tedious, and it was getting difficult for me to maintain a balance between personal and professional life. Owing to this, I decided that it is time for me to make a move to find a better workplace.
Luckily, the current organisation has amazing culture, flexible working hours, and the place offers facility to do work from home in case of personal emergency. My team members of the project are supportive and talented. Moreover, the assignment at workstation will give me opportunity to travel abroad for business purposes. In addition, co-workers are great fun to be with. We seldom go out for lunch parties.
Forgot to mention that I am planning to buy a car in coming. You know about my fascination towards vehicles, and at last I am going to purchase one for myself. I am extremely excited about it and will take you for ride once you are in town.
I look forward to hearing from you. Please hug Mohit and Ray for me. I miss them.
With love and best wishes,
From your friend,
Shruti Bhatt
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ankita, I trust that you are doing well. There i...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...trust that you are doing well. There is a news to share with you. I have switched to a...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iss them. With love and best wishes, From your friend, Shruti Bhatt
^^^^^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and best wishes, From your friend, Shruti Bhatt
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55769230769 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55827061131 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1336101883 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.7647058824 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2352941176 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134822199988 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452897988202 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540422691904 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521715016185 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409111381363 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.