You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your newjob
tell him/her your other news
Dear Ankita,
I trust that you are doing well. There is a news to share with you. I have switched to a new job. my work in former company was tedious, and it was getting difficult for me to maintain a balance between personal and professional life. Owing to this, I decided that it is time for me to make a move to find a better workplace.
Luckily, my current organisation has amazing culture in which we have flexible working hours, and facility to do work from home in case of personal emergency. My team members are supportive and talented. Moreover, workstation will give me opportunity to travel abroad for business purposes. In addition, co-workers are great fun to be with, and we seldom go out for lunch parties.
Forgot to mention that I am planning to buy a car in coming. you know about my fascination towards vehicles, and at last I am going to purchase one for myself. I am extremely excited about it and will take you for ride once you are in town.
I look forward to hearing from you. Please hug Mohit and Ray for me. I miss them.
With love and best wishes,
From your friend,
Shruti Bhatt
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...trust that you are doing well. There is a news to share with you. I have switched to a...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...with you. I have switched to a new job. my work in former company was tedious, and...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...t I am planning to buy a car in coming. you know about my fascination towards vehic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51470588235 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53875667742 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9735487222 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5625 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139167337311 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492020849975 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544378707025 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543012840015 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395611092471 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.