you have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am very excited to share with you one of my latest achievement in terms of new job.
You will be glad to know that after multiple rounds of interviews, I got selected in Worlds renowned IT organisation, Google. As you knew that I was not happy with my current job and was anxiously looking for new opportunity. Inspite of good productivity and immense hard work my efforts were never appreciated due to office politics. I decided to quit my job and fortunately, One of my college friend introduced me this job vacancy.
The new organisation has considered my twelve years of experience in programming and offered me senior software developer post. My training had started from last week and I am really having a great time here. Along with new experience and better pay scale, it has a lot many other facilities to offer including gymnasium, free multi-nation cuisines, passes to international sports events. I feel like I took the best decision of my life so far.
Another big surprise for you is that after my training I would be moving to Canada for a new project. This organisation has initiated my work visa for Canada and I may live there for next two years. I want you to visit my house as soon as possible with your family so that we enjoy good music and food together and cherish the memorable time that we spent together during our childhood.
Eagerly waiting to see you.
Warm Regards
Harry.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-22 | astrlw@hotmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2019-09-03 | kamrulshaker | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-18 | harmankaur | 89 | view |
| 2019-05-27 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my training I would be moving to Canada for a new project. This organisation has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.705126905 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5253485856 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19859151823 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631809046609 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448925502458 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118287493038 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420951418281 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.