You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Maria,
How are you doing? I hope you and everyone in your family are doing well. The purpose of this letter is to apprise you about my new job commencing w.e.f 1st November 2019. However, I am quitting my current job because of long working hours and low salary. In addition to this, I have to travel each day for two hours to reach the office and vice versa that causes pain in the body, particularly legs. Therefore, I accepted the offer from the ABC consultancy last month. They offered higher salary plus benefits and near to my residence as I can reach within fifteen minutes.
Furthermore, this would save a bunch of time after work that I can utilise in socialising, gathering with friends and family friends. Also, I can consume more time with my wife and kids. Besides, my elder son has been elected to play for South Halls football team. It is a pleasure watching son playing football which usually occurs after dark.
Moreover, I would like to invite you to dinner next month at any time of your choice. I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding the dates you would like to decide on dinner.
Yours Sincerely,
Amir
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68780487805 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34458125751 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9430553829 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6428571429 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23066623703 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809924445086 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842549083487 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133660506308 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083789749472 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.