You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter.
Explain why you change this job.
Describe your fresh job.
Tell him her other news.
Dear, Xian lee 06, June 2020
I am writing with regarding to you express my innovative career experience as a management trainee employee.
However, you are surprised to know that I am changing my last career for bitter pitfall guideline. Even though, you know here was the greatest designation holder foreign native limited company. Most top listed company in our country but there are no legitimacy criteria and also proper validation of services rules. Now, you are extremely wonderful that current employee chair name M.T.O located at the central street which is fully foreign funded autonomous institution. Next one year during the probationary period overcome I will took the executive officer at the department of foreign trade where is my sincere desire since my study period. You are happy to know while I am going to overseas duty as a senior responsible employee of this company. They will be provided me extravagant consolidation and remunerations during the abroad responsibility.
I hope that you will bless me and I am respect to you and your family forever.
Your loving friend.
Ziani xo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear, Xian lee 06, June 2020 I am writing with regar...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: O
...ul that current employee chair name M.T.O located at the central street which i...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l that current employee chair name M.T.O located at the central street which is ...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt employee chair name M.T.O located at the central street which is fully foreig...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...the probationary period overcome I will took the executive officer at the department...
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Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orever. Your loving friend. Ziani xo
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, regarding, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18784530387 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84490154319 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71270718232 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.641525861 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142514801181 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597793308969 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058383849489 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785253021581 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567849687795 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.