In the past, many people had skilled such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to thing house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Countless people had an efficiency to make their respective attire and capability of repairing extra ordinary housing methods during the pastime. I strongly agreed with this idea an account of some social and economic benefit and empowerment of woman's efficiency advancement towards the society.
Knitwear and apparel manufacturing sectors boomed rapidly in our country as a result handloom decreasing gradually in the same phenomena, of this way conventional skilled manpower and their dexterity decreased they rely on conventional manufacturing industry. Second, factor the purchasing power and capability of people increased them buying and selling their essential manufacturing products definite company prices. Any wearing dress product can get easily with the cheap prices rate that cannot provide those who made by homemade. Third, we see phase crystal clear such as supply and demand situation during the special occasion. Classical skilled cannot compete with manufacturing high stages as the market demand need because of new manufacturing high-tech verity.
Another scenario is the most occupied market posed by the capital merchant who are interested more rather than low skilled conventional skilled conventional sectors as a result massive number of traditional skilled workers disappearing for the time being present artificial manufacturing knitting dominated industry. Market competition are the most global standard export import quality and quantity factors lead to draw down the traditional skilled workers for want of perfectly design and decoration.
To sum up, we can make a proper investigation team by the knocking of the proper authority so that such kind of skilled initiative heritage culture to up lift worldwide as a brand perspective. Despite the traditional background no one can create a special market to focus on respective identity at the global market.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'skilled conventional'.
Suggestion: skilled conventional
...who are interested more rather than low skilled conventional skilled conventional sectors as a result massive number of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71985815603 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96561833486 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652482269504 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.323734916 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.636363636 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171837668925 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581741248878 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378656257759 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962120416863 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309097070086 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'skilled conventional'.
Suggestion: skilled conventional
...who are interested more rather than low skilled conventional skilled conventional sectors as a result massive number of t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71985815603 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96561833486 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652482269504 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.323734916 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.636363636 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171837668925 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581741248878 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378656257759 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962120416863 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309097070086 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.