I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to share my happiness with you that I got a new job after 10 rounds interviews. Before last week when I received the offer, It was a hard time for me since I was laid off by my previous compnay. Now things get better.
I liked my last job, since it was not easy for me to get a data analyst position in LA. While the recession was coming, thus the company had to reduce budgets.My team was on the list to be cut off. For three months I could not sleep and eat well. Fortunately, I got this job similar to my previous one. Moreover, due to the small scale of the company, I willl take ove the data engineering work besides the data preprocessing, which is closer to my dreaming postion duty.
This company locates in San Diego. Once I settled down here, I would like to invite you and Wendy to come for travelling, I promise you will love this city.
Bless me work better here! I am waiting for you reply.
Sincrerely,
Tony
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- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
... thus the company had to reduce budgets.My team was on the list to be cut off. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27419354839 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38627928461 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6909533918 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.25 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128838294032 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469684177312 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490943976469 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843028589982 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273963543717 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.