Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you well. I an thrilled you would like to select the Data Analytics in our major, which is the one of the most valuable courses I recommmend. It is my plesure to share my idea about this class with you.
First of all, I would like to make you clear this course is not easily to take. I believe it is as hard as the course Stochasitc Process delivered by professor X. However, compared with the practical application, dada analytics would be better as my concern. I even learned Tableau for data visualization besides projects based on python last year, which is essential to people working in IT companies nowadays.
Furthermore, you can live well during your academic study at this University. From the domitories to libraries, there are advanced facilities help you to live and study in a comfortable environment. I am sure that you will have a meaningful study career here. At last, as the GRE score required is around 316, you can try your best to get a higher score to make a deep impression on admission officers. That was what I did years ago.
Hope you can enjoy our university. I am looking forward to your reply soon.
Sincerely,
Tony
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- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both views and give your own opinionGive reasons for your answe 67
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 56
- On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
..., Hope this letter finds you well. I an thrilled you would like to select the D...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
..., Hope this letter finds you well. I an thrilled you would like to select the D...
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Line 6, column 245, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ication, dada analytics would be better as my concern. I even learned Tableau for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, look, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70476190476 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6839744449 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4034888492 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5714285714 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26992627103 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778033712748 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057004983019 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147353507556 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480281154555 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.