You have recently started work in a new company.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your newjob tell him/her your other news.

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You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
 explain why you changed jobs
 describe your newjob
 tell him/her your other news.

Hey John,

How are you doing mate? It's been such a long time since we last got together for a catch-up. Anyway, I have got some wonderful news that I simply have to share with you.

As you know, I've been looking for a position of Web Designer for quite some time as I was not satisfied with my job. Luckily, I got a call from a multinational company last week and got selected.

I'll be designing websites for international clients. Not only will it give me exposure, I will also have a good salary package. The timings of work are fixed, which makes it possible to spend more time with my family.

Actually, I've also moved to a new apartment. You remember my last accommodation, where we used to study; unfortunately, I've sold that house.

Anyway, this is what's happening in my life. Write back to let me know how you are.

Lots of love and a big hug,

Micheal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... where we used to study; unfortunately, Ive sold that house. Anyway, this is wha...
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... Lots of love and a big hug, Micheal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, if, look, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57325826824 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5727997023 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.4615384615 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3846153846 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988754853844 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345729192111 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378858336309 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472884208275 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327378793864 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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