When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or famous. In your opinion, what are the qualities that characterise a successful person? Why do you think these should be the criteria? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples
It is said that with great hard work, success comes. However, people determine the term of success with the wealth and popularity of the person. In my point of view, quality such as good values is one of the significant criteria to be known successful.
To begin with, an individual richness and well-known are at times been analyzed by their bank balance and public figure. However, in turn, many of them had struggled and face the problems of finance, family relationship, and competitors, and their grudges. Even have seen many failures in their pathway. Instead, they prefer to put themselves in hard times and tried to achieve success with their persistence and hard work.
On the other hand, Successful stories of great personalities helps to set an example for those who have lost hopes in life and seen failure. An example of Miss Universe Sushmita Sen helped to bring faith among young women coming from small towns who aspire to start a career in the film industry. Though there was no financial support, her mother stood beside her and support her to never give up and believe in herself to chase her dream. With this, Miss Sushmita won the crown of Miss Universe. In her interview, she explained that the values and her desire to win helped her to pursue her dream and become successful.
In conclusion, an individual who satisfies its needs and makes it's family happy is the one who can be said as a Successful and happy person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and become successful. In conclusion, an individual who satisfies its needs an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78087649402 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50347609956 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7666665748 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114650960904 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424902294131 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428638826662 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080718183641 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452538681614 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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