You have recently stayed in a hotel and after returning back you realized that you have left a piece of cloth at your hotel room. Write a letter to manager of hotel;
1) Explain the clothing
2) Where you left it
3) What manager should do after finding it
Dear Sir,
I stayed at your hotel last week dated 16th May 2019. Although the stay was really pleasant and appreciate your hospitality. The reason why I am writing you is a missed piece of cloth at hotel. It is a Black color scarf and has white dotted line over it.
I am sure I left it behind the door of washroom. When I was leaving the hotel I had been to washroom, suddenly there was a knock on the door. when I came out there was a waiter asking for luggage. Therefore in hurry I forget my belongings.
One of my friend akshay is visiting next week to your hotel, he will stay there for 2-3 days. Hence, it would be great if you handover my thing to him. Because that scarf is an essential thing to me.
Appreciate your help. Looking forward to hear from you as earliest as possible.
Your Faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...tality. The reason why I am writing you is a missed piece of cloth at hotel. It is...
^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...suddenly there was a knock on the door. when I came out there was a waiter asking fo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... there was a waiter asking for luggage. Therefore in hurry I forget my belongings. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... great if you handover my thing to him. Because that scarf is an essential thing to me....
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 39, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... Appreciate your help. Looking forward to hear from you as earliest as possible. Yo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31981825903 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3331207472 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.6153846154 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8461538462 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255817791994 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753841072782 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829440190347 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142069724478 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743205237293 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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