You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this in response to your advertisement in an Australian magazine last month.
I have recently moved to Australia after marriage and looking for job opportunities according to my expertise. My husband works as an IT engineer in an automobile company and has been transferred to work on a project in New Zealand for a duration of six months. Since, I am alone at home for this period I would like to apply for the post of childcare.
I have worked as a full-time care taker in a day care center at my hometown for 5 years. I have a hands on experience in managing child in the absence of their parents and follow the prescribed schedule provided by the guardian. I am tidy, dedicated and a hard-working women, therefore my experience and sincerity will help me to perform my role in a better way.
I want to pursue my studies and take admission in a Masters program. So in my free time, I can study for the admission test and look for potential universities offering Early Education as specialization.
If you have any questions, you can mail me at abc@gmail.com or call at 44553366
Hoping for a positive reply.
Your's faithfully,
Linda Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ng to my expertise. My husband works as an IT engineer in an automobile company and h...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
...my expertise. My husband works as an IT engineer in an automobile company and has been t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 97, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hand' or simply 'hands'?
Suggestion: a hand; hands
...nter at my hometown for 5 years. I have a hands on experience in managing child in the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ibed schedule provided by the guardian. I am tidy, dedicated and a hard-working w...
^
Line 11, column 270, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...I am tidy, dedicated and a hard-working women, therefore my experience and sincerity ...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o perform my role in a better way. I want to pursue my studies and take admi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74761904762 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99975811572 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3496378857 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205470035221 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712979044621 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499279507025 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100764604464 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617813337985 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.