You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Mr and Mrs Ross,
My name is Mrs Paula. I am writing this letter with regards to the advertisement about the job offer given by you in December edition of the 'Times Magazine Australia.
I would like you to consider me for the given position. As, I am really keen in working for you and, I think I have a good experience at managing the kids of different age group. I love travelling and exploring new places and different culture. Although, I have never been to Australia before, but I am pretty sure that there are many places to explore and gain an unforgetable experience. I would further like to inform you that, I have previous experience in managing children with age group of 6 months to 8 years. Currently I am working for a canadian family in new Zealand for last 2 years. I am taking care of their 2 kids who is 4 years and 6 years old. I enjoy spending time with them. We go to parks, play puzzles during free time. I would further like to emphasize that, I have even done a short course on first Aid. I have learnt a lot being with kids, I am very Patient, tidy, reliable and hard working. Before to this I was working for a child care centre in Malaysia for 3 years.
In case, if I get the chance to work for you, it would be great. I would like to spend my free time and weekends by exploring Australia, visiting different places and especially trying different cusines and making new friends.
Thank you for taking time and to read my letter. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. You can get in touch with me in case, you need any further information or any recomendations.
Kind Regards,
Paula
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 71, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...to read my letter. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. You can get in touch wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 305.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53516202498 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.13402061856 230% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1926013426 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300832688493 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873406818601 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641184178493 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142417335726 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836344439615 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.