Some people say that science study should be mandatory at schools: others argue that it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
science has now become the backbone of this community. Here it is said that many are in the opinion about science that it should be taught to students while others ignore its importance. In this essay I will be discussing on both side and at the end I will give my opinion.
On one side, science is an unavoidable part in academics. From the home appliances to office equipment’s and industrial machineries are all the outcome of the scientific research. thus it is vital to teach students about the basics of its mechanisms. Moreover, every community requires medical aid. Without the help of a medical personnel, it is impossible to build a healthy society. medical training can only be given to anyone only if he has basic knowledge of science. For an impeccable example, with the help of latest medical interventions, diseases like cancer and heart related illness are cured. As a result, the community can be benefited by the education given to all.
On the other side, science is not the only factor which drives a society. there are number of other needs which require the human strength. if all the youths focus on science then there will be an imbalance in the smooth running of the society. Furthermore, every individual are having their own likes and dislikes. it is the right of a student to select the stream of subjects which they require. As an optimum example, a friend of mine who had a keen interest on farming choose to study agriculture as his primary subject whereas, another comrade became a software engineer. As an outcome, the imbalance of the society regarding the human requirement is fulfilled.
Even though there are different opinion about the importance of science. In my opinion, basic science must be taught in schools as an important subject to all. thus a better society is built for the betterment of our next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, whereas, while, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88714733542 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77633242556 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4248824055 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2380952381 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170648188574 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455828569087 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590810406118 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116614113807 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899143816115 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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