You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter as an expression of interest towards your advert published in the magazine for staying and taking care of your beloved six-year-old child for a period of six months. I am a certified day-care professional living in Sydney, Australia for more than a decade.
Taking care of young kids requires a very special skill-set involving looking after every-day needs such as brushing teeth, regular showers, dressing up, breakfast etcetera. I am fully aware of these daily chores which includes the above mentioned tasks and as well as the other outdoor activities which the child requires from time to time. Moreover, I will keep the child engaged in arts and crafts, weekend outings and story-telling about his favorite characters.
Therefore, I believe that I am a suitable candidate for this job and can assure you of my credentials and that your child will be safe in my custody. I have also acquired a green belt certification from a renowned karate institute to tackle some unfortunate situations related to child’s safety. I have attached my certifications and affiliations for your consideration and details of two references. You may check and call them for a detailed feedback of my services.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Emma Watson
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12385321101 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.874273273 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660550458716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5933123383 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.545454545 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262278617737 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859961436407 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793213270925 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147581713024 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839414935259 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.