Dear Mr. Georgy,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in tutoring your children in Hindi language regarding which you had given an advert in the Australian newspaper.
I would be a suitable candidate for this post as I have many years of experience as a professor in Hindi language. Apart from this, Hindi is my mother-tongue which will be beneficial for your children as they will get to communicate with a native speaker.
I would also like to bring to your notice that I am not only a language expert but also a counsellor. Hence, if your children are going through any problem related to studies or other aspects then I can give them professional counselling.
Other than these, I have a lot of free time to spend as I have retired from my job, and also teaching your kids will give me an opportunity to keep myself engaged rather than spending time alone at home.
I request you to kindly consider me for this post and looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ms. Sruthy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, regarding, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67777777778 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64028617978 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9632220331 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31320223878 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125269508824 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648148693437 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161708933561 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648295219358 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.