You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Mr. Jagafi
This is Pourya Mirzaei writing regarding your last advertisement about hiring a new member for the city museum shop.
I have been looking for this particular job since I graduated from Art University. I pursued my bachelor's degree in ((Historical figures)) and hold special qualifications in preserving art masterpieces; therefore, I have enough knowledge about the sphere of the working place.
As a matter of fact, I had been working in an art gallery while I was a student therefore, I have experience in managing the shop and deal with people. Also, I do speak English and French fluently which may help you attract much more customers to the shop.
Having mention I have been looking for this chance to immerse myself in art and history, this is a tremendously useful experience not only for acquiring more experience, but also it is a reasonable source of income for me.
I look forward to your positive response.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89937106918 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87008910921 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6633438546 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 4.34317383033 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253604129094 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10254995473 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507377991879 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124645361295 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571072934535 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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