You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays.
You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apply job in the post office. I came to know through advertisement in the newspaper. I am interesed in this job during my summer vacation for three months.
I am pursuing post graduates in business management. Recently i pursued my final exams of the first year of management studies. I would like to give a valuable time of these three months. Last year i woked with one of well know brand of courier company. I learnt about the courier service process. There i engaged in booking the shipment and allocating to delivery boy to deliver the parcel. Morevoer, i have a good command over english and well versed in computer.
In future, i would like to work in the service industry and would like to interact new people. This job helps me to go on my path of my career. Additionaly, i will get stipend for three months that will support me in my studies.
I am waiting to hear a good respond on my job application.
Yours Sincerely,
Mohammed Idris.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...through advertisement in the newspaper. I am interesed in this job during my summ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my summer vacation for three months. I am pursuing post graduates in business ...
^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duates in business management. Recently i pursued my final exams of the first yea...
^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bout the courier service process. There i engaged in booking the shipment and all...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...english and well versed in computer. In future, i would like to work in the service in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... well versed in computer. In future, i would like to work in the service indus...
^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o on my path of my career. Additionaly, i will get stipend for three months that ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62569832402 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64963533303 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.0319960336 44.8134815571 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.2 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147066688123 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471228628347 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612219894483 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911625223277 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833874787382 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...through advertisement in the newspaper. I am interesed in this job during my summ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my summer vacation for three months. I am pursuing post graduates in business ...
^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duates in business management. Recently i pursued my final exams of the first yea...
^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bout the courier service process. There i engaged in booking the shipment and all...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...english and well versed in computer. In future, i would like to work in the service in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... well versed in computer. In future, i would like to work in the service indus...
^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o on my path of my career. Additionaly, i will get stipend for three months that ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62569832402 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64963533303 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.0319960336 44.8134815571 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.2 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147066688123 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471228628347 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612219894483 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911625223277 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833874787382 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.