You have seen an advertisement for a part-time work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing.
Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing your interest. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job
• Ask what work you would be expected to do
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to express my interest in applying for a part-time job in your hotel.
My name is Elina Gordon. Currently I am looking for a part-time job and was very pleased to come across your advertisement.
I have been living in Kalamazoo for 2 months now. I am student in Kalamazoo University studying on Hospitality Management program, and that is one of the main reasons I would like to have a job in your hotel. As a resident of this town, I have learnt all about it, visited all points of interest, including museums, aquarium, churches and clubs. I have to say that I am a real foodie, and because of that I have tried the best restaurants and cafes in the town and therefore can provide hotel’s guests with very good piece of advice. What’s more, I believe I can be an asset to your business, as I have suitable soft skills: I love working with people, sharing my thoughts, helping out and generally consider myself as an enthusiastic, energetic and hardworking young person.
At my end, I would really appreciate if you could provide details on the job duties, expected for this position. Please don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any further information.
Looking forward to your reply.
Faithfully,
Elina Gordon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73636363636 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78886510879 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2394645711 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316451515187 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903677617746 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687626360137 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148954264919 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981732006308 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.