You have seen an advertisement for a parttime volunteer to work with out pay for an organisation that helps local children. You would like to do this work
Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter
Say why you are interested in this type of work
Explain why you think you are suitable
Give details of when you could do this work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter because of the advertisement for part-time volunteer to help children to learn maths.
I am interested in work because my daughter is also working with your office from two years. Also, since I like to teach maths to kids I think I can help.
I am suitable for this volunteer job because I am a math teacher and I am teached kids from 14 years at Mary School in Hamilton.
I can do work from 5pm after my school hours for one hour and help kids for maths every Monday. If you want on weekends I can try to make sometime only in the morning as evening I am busy. Also, if you want more than one hour for some slow student you will have to make arrangement after 7pm. This can be one to one class.
Please check my cv and give my one chance to help the children and you will be satisfied with my effort.
Regards,
Himanshu Kothari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter because of the ...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be satisfied with my effort. Regards, Himanshu Kothari
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25974246014 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.510288321 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265893478081 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996249830549 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632840488911 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150200767111 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672252776369 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.