You have seen an advertisement for a parttime volunteer to work with out pay for an organisation that helps local children. You would like to do this work
Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter
Say why you are interested in this type of work
Explain why you think you are suitable
Give details of when you could do this work
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing with reference to your advertisement on 1st January 2020 on Kijiji looking to find volunteers for children with a placement in Africa for 6 months. I am very interest to take up this volunteer job and therefore I request you to consider my application.
For me, it has always been my dream and passion to work with children in Africa. Since they live in very poor and difficult conditions with little education options, I really feel I can help the kids there.
I believe I am good for this position as I take 6 months assignment seriously. I have worked in India with similar organizations which work for the kids living in difficult conditions or in villages. I have the required experience and passion to commit to help the kids in Africa.
If my application is accepted, please provide me a weeks time to finish my notice period with my office here in Milton. I will be a good team member and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards
Antony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in difficult conditions or in villages. I have the required experience and passio...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...lication is accepted, please provide me a weeks time to finish my notice period with my...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, therefore, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7261596655 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6766934106 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245187486037 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893354922599 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617393024022 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147763299841 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734109954237 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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