You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the student association officer of the local college and say
- Where is your apartment located?
- When will the room be available?
- What are your requirements for a student to stay there?
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this letter on behalf of the scheme for spare room rent out to students in your college. The apartment is located at 27/5, parkavenue around 500metres from the college main building.
The apartment is in a pleasant residential area without noise pollution. The amenities in the apartment include recreation club, swimming pool and gymnasium. I am living in a 3-bedroom apartment where one of the rooms is not used. The room has an attached bathroom with continuous water supply along with geyser. Internet is also available in the room. There are furniture’s in the room which includes a queen-sized bed and a small table and chair which can be used as a study table.
The room needs to be painted before it is occupied by any student. The rooms will be ready to move in within a week. If any of the association officer needs to check the room before it is available to students, they can drop in to the following address mentioned above in the evening after 4pm in the weekdays or anytime of the day at the weekends.
I am looking for a French speaking student for the spare room since we can speak French. Drinking is not allowed inside the room. Girls are preferred over boys.
Best regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sidential area without noise pollution. The amenities in the apartment include recr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66196751613 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.033932067 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337602633349 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949117458578 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687091896503 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191377108218 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800946134086 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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