You hired a car from a rental company and while you were on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write to the company to explain it. You need to explain:
• Where you hired it and when?
• Describe how the accident happened?
• What you did after the accident?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to inform regarding an accident that happened last week at City Centre Square. I was driving the car I rented from your City Centre Deira office on the 12th May.
This accident happened on Monday 15th May at 12pm, while I was coming out of the shopping mall parking area. I was driving on the right track, when a jeep drove into my lane from the no-entry area. We had immediately called the police from the accident spot. Since it was a minor accident and all papers of the car is up-to-date, there was no issues in getting the claim report from the police. As per the cops, I can take the car along with the documents to the insurance claim department for an evaluation and cost-free repair.
Following the accident, I have carefully drove it to a nearby long-term parking bay. I would prefer not to drive the car and cause any additional damage to the car. I hereby attach all the copies of claim reports for your reference. Please let me know when you can arrange to pick the car and original docs from me.
Awaiting your earliest response.
Yours faithfully
Sandra Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'driven'.
Suggestion: driven
...ollowing the accident, I have carefully drove it to a nearby long-term parking bay. I...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60396039604 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37397272424 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628712871287 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0615163148 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5384615385 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165874020589 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492242738674 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554341477183 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926510389686 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646591043729 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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