You hired a car from a rental company and while you were on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write to the company to explain it. You need to explain:
• Where you hired it and when?
• Describe how the accident happened?
• What you did after the accident?
Dear Sir,
I have recently returned from a short stay at your hotel. after reaching, I was looking for my camera to show my trip photos to a friend when I realised I had left it in the hotel.
When I was packing for checkout, I kept a camera on the table near to a bed thinking to pack it after breakfast. Although Later on, it slipped from my mind completely.
I would appreciate it if you could ask your staff to check my hotel's room 1004 for a camera. it is a silver Canon D540 digital camera in a black camera case. you could find my name and address in the case.
it would be a privilege if you could send me a courier on my address. I would be more than happy to pay you postage. but it's quite far for me to come and collect it.
I apologise for the inconvenience caused by me to you and your staff. I look forward to hearing from you on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
A Kansal
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| 2019-12-13 | Aman.Kansal1234 | 64 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...turned from a short stay at your hotel. after reaching, I was looking for my camera t...
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Line 13, column 103, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breakfasts'?
Suggestion: breakfasts
...near to a bed thinking to pack it after breakfast. Although Later on, it slipped from my ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...check my hotels room 1004 for a camera. it is a silver Canon D540 digital camera i...
^^
Line 19, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... digital camera in a black camera case. you could find my name and address in the c...
^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...y name and address in the case. it would be a privilege if you could send ...
^^
Line 25, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... be more than happy to pay you postage. but its quite far for me to come and collec...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31818181818 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3728989728 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2166666353 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.4615384615 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212114889129 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870949898291 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761937674539 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129506351762 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875172192887 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.