You live in a flat and you have a tenancy agreement which states that you must give 3 months notice when you wish to leave. You have paid a deposit of 2 months rent. now a member of you family has a problem and you need to give up your flat and return home as soon has possible. Write a later to your land lady, explain your circumstances, tell her what you intend to do and ask her for special consideration.
Dear Mrs. Parker,
I am writing to inform you about my serious circumstances and I must leave this flat.
As a tenant, I know the agreement that I must give notice for leaving before 3 month. But my grandfather is very serious and now he hospitalized. Moreover my mother is only one who take care of him. I am only one daughter. Because of his stubborn to stay with me, I want to go there. As per doctor's prediction, he might be live one month only.
I will leave my job and return to my hometown. I will find out a new job there and set there. As a deposit, I paid 2 month's rent $790. Whether you will return my deposit, it will help me for the treatment of my grandfather.
Since 9 months, I live here that is fantastic experience with you. As per you know me, I am very punctual to give rent. Hence please understand my situation and help me to give rent.
I hope you will understand me and please me.
Yours sincerely,
Saroj Rathod
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...I must give notice for leaving before 3 month. But my grandfather is very serious and...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 147, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...s very serious and now he hospitalized. Moreover my mother is only one who take care of ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 121, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ow me, I am very punctual to give rent. Hence please understand my situation and help...
^^^^^
Line 37, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and please me. Yours sincerely, Saroj Rathod
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47222222222 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5643327532 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4670462253 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.3125 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.25 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266976845421 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828541876392 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816099208685 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165907101359 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613759659834 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.46 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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