You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring into notice my dissatisfaction with my roommate. I am living in Azad hostel room number 252 in sharing.
Actually, she is always having parties in the room which ends up in the late morning. I asked her number of times to have parties outside but she never listens to me. Her friends visiting are frequent. Apart from this, she borrows my thing without asking me which is quite unacceptable for me.
I am having very important exams in my next semester and need to study hard. I have to appear in the final semester and also I have to appear in the UPSC exam which needs high concentration. I am unable to cope with this environment.
I would like to change my accommodation in next semester. It is a humble request to arrange a single-seater room for me as I do not want to share and have these same problems again. I look forward to a positive reply from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...SC exam which needs high concentration. I am unable to cope with this environment...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...able to cope with this environment. I would like to change my accommodation i...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50877192982 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69696545271 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9281910372 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3076923077 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118081465562 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428840499794 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298514895424 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708737627328 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214887432075 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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