You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this to express my concern with the room number 105 in the hostel allotted to me. Although the facilities are satisfactory, I am starting to face some difficulties in getting along with the roommate.
The course of Medicine that I have taken here requires me to study extremely hard, in fact, on several days I had to even spend nights to finish the assignments. All I need is the suitable environment for a medical student, however, the problem lies with the loud music played continually by my partner.
Despite of frequent requests I made to him for using the headphones instead of the woofer, the situation did not change much. I appears that either he does not care about the issue or it's being done intentionally for an unknown reason to me.
Therefore, I am in dire need of your help on the matter. Could you please shift me with someone else, preferably the one pursuing the same stream as mine; it would further better to have a senior, not the priority though.
Hope to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Dheeraj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 129, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'appear'
Suggestion: appear
...r, the situation did not change much. I appears that either he does not care about the ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86559139785 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6648504481 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704301075269 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9899989581 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135210864791 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477412885977 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518462885041 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779315602742 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445375091538 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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