You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inform you of the issues faced by me after I lost my student identification card. Recently I have shifted my accommodation to Smith's street which is not far away from the college, and I am sure that I had put it in the bag i usually carry along with me, but I fear about throwing it in trash with other waste papers while I was making some room for putting the documents in the already untidy table drawer.
As a result of this incident, various facilities such as medical care or transport, costs me very dearly. Every month I receive fixed amount of salary from the part-time job and the pocket-money, however past few days have turned out really hard to manage the expenses, and eventually I could end up with no finances for the survival if I do not get the ID proof soon.
Therefore, please accept my sincere apologies on losing it, and I urge you to allot a new card as soon as possible. I assure you that I will be more cautious in future.
Hope to hearing your response.
Yours faithfully
Dheeraj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...assure you that I will be more cautious in future. Hope to hearing your response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56478556609 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.729166666667 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.514084614 44.8134815571 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.5 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211827388008 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934114655695 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556460639686 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10553622768 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345730087728 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.