You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
-describe the situation
-explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
-say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Madam, I am writing you to tell about the problem with an accomodation I live in and another student I live with. There are several problems with accomodation, such as its location and convenience (bed, light, noise from the outside). Also a student, I am living with, always comes back drunk. I just cannot live with such a person. I hate alcohol.
As for the problems, the accomodation is located far from the university I am studying at. Also I have got a problem with my bed. Actually, it is broken down into 2 pieces, so I have to sleep on the floor. We have got only one lamp for two of us. Finally, the noise from the outside makes too difficult to learn other languages. The student I am living with, as I said, is always drunk and I saw drugs on his table. He is too creepy for me. I do not want to call the police because I do not want to have any problems. If you can deal with it, do something.
I would prefer an accomodation somewhere nearby my university because it takes too long before I get to my lessons. I do not care about type of accomodation, but the only thing I would ask is living alone. Surely, I would like to have a taut bed, at least 3 lamps for best lighting and good noise-isolation windows, so I could prepare for the lessons well.
Thank you for your help.
Best regards, Steven.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r from the university I am studying at. Also I have got a problem with my bed. Actua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, so, well, as for, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28685258964 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56749339802 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3459251068 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6315789474 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2105263158 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.49484536082 736% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19361718675 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627580525464 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762500911112 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103007635234 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901826801225 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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