You missed to attend friends invite Write a letter to your friend apologia for not coming explain how did you try to contact him her what is the alternate plan

Essay topics:

You missed to attend friends invite. Write a letter to your friend:
apologia for not coming
explain how did you try to contact him/her
what is the alternate plan.

Dear Ankush,

I am writing to apologize for being unable to attend the wedding of your brother.

Sorry, It's taken me so long to write to you but finally I put pen to paper to explain why I was unable to show my presence on this auspicious occasion. But I was helpless as my mother was hospitalized due to kidney transplant surgery and needed my presence around her. I hope you would understand.

However, I tried to reach you by phone call but it says, "Number does not exist". Probably you have changed your contact number. I wanted to inform you by sending personal letter but due to emergency medical conditions, I was unable to do so.

Now after proper rest and recovery, my mother and I, are glad to invite you and your family at our home for lunch. Moreover, she wants to meet all of you personally. Please accept our heartiest congratulations for your brother's wedding. I hope that you would accept my sincere apology and visit us soon.

I look forward to hearing from from you.

Best regards,
Ell

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...t us soon. I look forward to hearing from from you. Best regards, Ell
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, look, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68681318681 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65523363725 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5994450707 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6153846154 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230099337843 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836500458165 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469009430313 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127485214881 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453055818315 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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