The best way to protect the environment is to reduce the amount of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last decades, as global economy developed in a repaid speed, there is a high demand on air travel. As a result, it brought negative impact to our environment. Many people believed that the best way to protect our environment is to limit the air travel.As far as I am concerned, reducing air travel won’t be the best way to protect the environment, since there are more alternative approach to keep our environment.
I am convinced air travel create a huge need for non renewable resources such as fuels. Burning fossil fuels will generate carbon dioxide which is one of the main contributor to global warming. Eventually deteriorate our environment. However, if people choose alternative ways to travel overseas such as train or ship. It could lead to more air pollution into the air since they need fossil fuels and they are less efficient than air travel.
In order to protect the environment, planting trees could be a perfect option. Photosynthesize is a process used by plant to covert carbon dioxide into oxygen. Which could help ease global warming. Planting trees could also help cut soil erosion, reduce the risk of flood.
In stead of travel by air, people could use more environmental friendly approaches to travel domestic. We could use transportation that use renewable energy to travel such as electric cars or bike. These transportation barely generate any pollution into our environment. If travel inside the city, choose bus and not drive a car. The green house gases generated by bus per capital is much less than car.
As I mentioned above, reducing air travel could be a way to protect our environment however there are many other efficient alternatives to keep our plant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... environment is to limit the air travel.As far as I am concerned, reducing air tra...
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Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t to covert carbon dioxide into oxygen. Which could help ease global warming. Plantin...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Instead of'?
Suggestion: Instead of
...erosion, reduce the risk of flood. In stead of travel by air, people could use more en...
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Line 13, column 199, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transportation' or 'These transportations'?
Suggestion: This transportation; These transportations
...o travel such as electric cars or bike. These transportation barely generate any pollution into our ...
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Line 13, column 306, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bus'
Suggestion: to bus
...ment. If travel inside the city, choose bus and not drive a car. The green house ga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04895104895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83115107364 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8832383098 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231819514557 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678917244299 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840144310826 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148702347501 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861080664564 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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